All Comments on 'Katherine'

by ivvin

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Your Story

HAs been mentioned on the New Story Review thread in the Author's Hangout Forum.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
a bit dull

your story used no quote conversation, nor much conversation at all.

it had no present tense, was very historical.

it was a bit dull. you might want to look up the how to's here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
ok

Huh, I thought your story was quite good. Could have done with a bit more detail, but none the less a good story.

I am interested to see what you write next...

MetzovMetzovalmost 18 years ago
I think it was a good first attempt

I do think it belongs in Erotic Couplings instead of Romance. Romance has to do with love in my mind and the word was never implied by ether of them.

peggytwittypeggytwittyalmost 18 years ago
Well-done one night stand

There were some very good helpful comments given. Keep writing as you have a flair that needs to be expressed.

Thank you for the entertainment.

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
Chance Meeting!

After a long hectic day at work a man and woman bump into each other. After they share time together, culimating in a sweet erotic interlude. Well Written. Enjoyable!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Excellent!

I love it! Great writing skill and use of words! Two thumbs way up! Please write more!

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