All Comments on 'She Makes Me Pay'

weird ending but still a great story

Really hot story. Be sure to tell us the next lessons.

Super hot story Brian Kreamer. You have so much to offer!

Looks like you hadn't learned your lesson and needed another. Naw, you liked what she did to you and wanted her to do it again.

I Really enjoyed your story and your surprise ending. Thanks!

Loved this story, how come you don't attract the rednecks like I do? You've inspired me to write more cream pie stories myself.

Cheers

Malibu

Hi Brian1,

In my opinion, these are all great stories. Do you have some more that you have written but have not yet posted to Literotica? If so, please post them.

GREAT LETTER I FINALLY GOT MY WIFE TO SIT ON MY FACE AFTER CUMMIMG INSIDE HER.NOW SHE LOVES IT AS MUCH AS I DO

This was one of the best i have read on this site. I give you 10 out of 10. Keep up the good work.

Always gets her hot she even sucks me off again as well.

Seconds in our 50's.

Forcing you to eat your cum in this way is so hot. I have to jack off. Thanks.

Love to eat my cum from the wife when I can, its especially nice when its during her menses, as I get the added pleasure of the smell and taste.

is he doesnt realize where his bread is buttered, TK U MLJ LV NV

I want to be her boy! Thanks for writing this scorching story!

If he really didn't want to do it, he should have told her. Forcing a mate to do something isn't right. He should have jacked off and told her no!

You force someone to do something, they'll resent you. And that resentment will build up and one day blowup. And she'll be history. Deservedly so. Dumb bitch.

So... Everybody's mad she made him eat his own cum. I'd breakup with my boyfriend of he wouldn't even kiss me after I sucked his dick. If a girl swallows it regularly show her some fucking affection, damn!

Just push her away. In a partnership, one partner doesn't force the other to do something they don't like or agree to. If she insists, kick her ass to the curb. Even for fiction, this story doesn't work.

My wife got me into this about 10 years ago.... I was reluctant at first, but only after I came. I begged for it before cumming! Now I don't back down and LOVE the attention she gives me before, and after sex! No cum on towels is our rule! Either she or I eat it! So much fun!!!

Push her away. If she needs to coerce you into doing something than your relationship is about to be history anyway. This felt like a story about a wife that wanted things to be her way or the highway. Not a very clever presentation. Couldn't relate to the characters so I didn't care one way or the other about them. A "1".

Kiss her that is. The next time she tried to feed him the cum he stood up, bitch slapped her and threw her out the door. Never spoke to or saw her again. The end to a giant pile of horse manure.

She's manipulative and deserves to be put down

Good story with regard to the sexual tension and buildup,BUT Zippy the husband shouldn't have put up with her bullshit! After making her cum for the 3rd time that Thursday night,when she started dictating rules he should have just forced her down,fucked the shit out pf her,and pulled out just in time to squirt all over her face!

Amazing story. Can't believe the homophobes who can"t enjoy A hot story.

I enjoyed dialog between husband and wife, especially the wife's. The way she emphasized her intent throughout the story was particularly good. Her words served to humiliate, embarrass, and arouse her husband and readers. The way she explicitly teased and taunted him, turned up the heat of this story. Please continue to write more like this; women exuding the same type of power, control and lewdly kinky eroticism over the male in the story, expressly for her pleasure, especially when her pleasure might be derived from his humiliation or embarrassment of being forced to eat his own cum.

If she lets you eat your cum and it gets her hot then she wants to fuck more then you get more pussy. You keep her hot and sexually aroused dressing for your pleasure I don't understand what you are complaining about. Send her to me and my wife we will keep her happy. I'll eat cum as needed.

If she wants to dictate rules, start getting HER to the point of orgasm and then get up and walk away for a while and leave her hanging (maybe even jack off on her first). Tell her she can pack and leave if your feelings mean that little to her.

Good for you! Now you need to kiss her deeply right after she sucks off another guy - yummy!

Someone needs to make this a video

Such a hot story, I want my wife to tease me for a few days, them force me to eat the cream pie too.

Loved how the wiife continually encouraged her husband to eat the pie. Often, it only takes a little bit of encouragement to set up a habit that is so satisfying for both.

Really enjoyed the story..luv eating my wife's pussy..with or without cream... next I want to eat pussy filled by a gorgeous black gentleman

Now I can make my wife convinced with this story and ask to do the same with me.

Awesome! Loved the ending!!!

Good story.

Please look up the definition of "smitten."

Loved it but don't get the ending.

Love it when the guy has to do what the gal wants!

This would be a lot easier to read if you would spell check and proofread.