All Comments on 'Kate's Capture Pt. 02 Ch. 02'

to see a new chapter however short...can't wait to see what happens next in this adventure...the Captian must have something up his sleeve by now eh?...thank you for sharing with us. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

I'm so glad that you've returned to continue the story! Please write and post more! I think I see a glimmer of humanity in Kate's new Master and I greatly appreciate it if I'm correct. I'm not one for harsh torture but a firm hand is always good :-D Keep up the fantastic writing! You are by far one of the best writers I've ever had the pleasure of reading!

I reallly love this story....I sure hope we see the Captain again though as I always thought they would hook up. I think Ahmed is a great character....he's a nice change from just pure torture which I couldn't read and is making this more of a nonconsensual/reluctance relationship with Kate. I adore how you write your characters and hope to see many long chapters of this continue!

I absolutely love this part of the story. The way you write about Ahmed's character in this part of the story is great! I can't wait for the rest!

I love your series on Kate and can't take it any longer... Can u release the next chapter already?????

Enjoyed your story, hope you continue it on. Good believable characters.

i absolutely love your stories and cant wait for the next chapter. i hope you release it soon!

more please, master. i hold out hope for true love with the captain but... i know whatever you have in store for kate will please me also.

A great chapter to an already great story. So many of us can't wait unitl you add another chapter! I hope it is soon!

I am starving for a new chapter, please write one!

I can't wait for more. I love her journey... even at the hands of Ahmed. I can't wait for the Captain to come back.

have read the whole series and loved it am so badly hanging out for more... will the captain rescue her what kind of things will she suffer at Ahmed's hands.. pleaseplease write more im begging you

That CAN'T be the end! When will there be another chapter? Please please please finish the story! Kate has to get rescued by the captain and she needs to realize that he is her true master! Please don't leave me disappointed like you did with the story about Leah.

please continue. gotta know what happens to kate. the captains gotta rescue her! please please dont leave everyone hanging. finish the story...please

write more!

wont the captain come for her?

cant wait to read!

Please add more.

This of course is going to torture me until i see that you have written more......

you just have to write the next submission! kates capture is easily the best story on lit please PLEASE continue her journey! cant wait to read more!

please write more!

You can't leave us hanging like this, please write more, I really really want a happy ending for Kate.

i absolutely loved this story but you need to continue it. we need more of the captain!!!!!

I truly hope that you will finish the story of Kate and the Captain. I loved this story, just like I love all of your stories. Thank you for writing,

Sarah

Pleaseeeee, Please, Pretty please finish the story... I'm begging!

I love this continuation of Kate's story. I hope you'll come back and finish it someday.

I beg of you! Come back and finish it!

I hope you finish it, I thought the Captain was looking out for her,

so somehow he needs to save her. An Ending like Leah's Capture

would be nice ..........

love the way you write, seeing your characters change throughout the story.

hate that this story doesn´t have an ending.. any ending.

What happened?

You can't just stop there! I'm dying to know more! Does the captain rescue her?! Please pick this story up again!

We need more! What about the captain???

There are far too many unfinished stories on this website. It's frustrating.

CONTINUE!!!!! I wanna know what happens with the captain!!!! End the story!!! I love your work!! But this will drive me nuts!!

Finish your story please! Where is he!? Come on!

I don't know if it would help to beg, but I'll give it a shot. Plllleeeasse!!! Please finish the story. You are a genius with the torture scenes. I think you get off on that the most. Once the torture seems to come to an end, so does the story. Puh-lease finish this. We beg of you!

It's a shame it's been six years since any of this has been updated. This is one of the most appealing series I've ever read. The characters that are capable of giving me wonderful chills can be counted on one hand, and Doc is one of them. My only criticism was the lack of physical descriptions of the characters, although that managed to work on some level. I hope sometime you remember this story and come back to it.

it seems obvious by now that passionstjohn has no intention of finishing this story. Its writers like these who get me truly pissed off.

I'm as disappointed as anyone, but sheesh, come on. PassionStJohn might not be able to finish the story. Maybe something happened. So instead of getting upset with the author, finish it yourself if you have to.

I loved this story, but what I enjoyed besides the wonderful humiliation and torture was the intimacy between Kate and the Captain. If you ever do continue to write this, please add some more intimacy like that. Thank you for writing such a wonderful series for us all to enjoy.

I need more... please add to this story!

Nine years lol it's pretty obvious your not gonna finish but I'm gonna beg anyway. Pretty pretty please with a cherry on top! But seriously 9 years these poor people who read it in 06, the suspense must be too much. It is what it is I guess. Although I must say your really talented, the plot line was incredible and just an all round outstanding piece of work. I wish you could finish but it's been nine years so you know lol

More please, great story.

Thank you, this has been such an amazing story! I would love to read more and find out what happens next!!

Please continue.

Just once I'd like the woman be a kick ass undercover operative.