by Saucyminx
So happy to be your first! Loved it, M, but I enjoy all your writing. More please. I'm as insatiable as you are.
Normally, I'd be saying "where's the dialogue?", but you capyure the emotion perfectly without it.
Very well done. You captured the essence of the moment perfectly.
Very hot indeed. I can see I'm going to have to catch up with your other stories too.
Awesome as usual sweety, you use your words like a painter uses their brush, I love what you paint.
Like the "Perfect Slut", the little Minx never fails to disappoint her readers. I loved this story. The detour to the waxing parlor was, in some ways, more breathtaking than the main event.
Time for an afternoon coffee.
J
Very nice story. What I enjoyed most about the story was that it was apparent how much she enjoyed her dom and how much he enjoyed her as well.
Keep the stories cumming, and I will do the same!!! Ace
That was a great short story...wonderful, quick character development. Can't wait to read more of your stories!
I also liked hearing about what does on in the waxing parlor, and certainly everyone needs there own sexual plaything both men and women.