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by The_Fool

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sophia janesophia janealmost 18 years ago
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Great work, Fool. You're mentioned in the new poem reviews.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
you have such

an inate feel for the rhythm of grief and living.

I love how your words seem slow and measured like sobs which we try to keep quiet, yet they burst from our restraints in gasps and shaky breath.

Marvellous

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
nothing foolish here

I think it has it all. Got a nice layout and beat and

covers the subject well. sandspike

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