by Isferr
Too much ass fucking on this site. Get over it. Do something original.
Walt
Liked the scenario. Payback can be nice sometimes. Where's Chapter 3. Can't wait to read what he has in store for her.
The use of unbridled anger as a rationale for actions was annoying - there's enough of that going on, who needs more? THe concept was good but I quit half way through one of his childish tantrums - grow up and write an adult story.
I wish I too could hate you after you do me like that!
Are you as hot to see as you are to read??
Ouch!