All Comments on 'Workplace Relations'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
lovely

very hot and sweet

manyquestionsmanyquestionsover 15 years ago
Sweet and hot

Both sweet and hot. Innocent and exciting.

bigrimmstalesbigrimmstalesalmost 14 years ago
mixing the metaphors

i was confused by...'as she stood frozen, as if I had ignited some sort of fire within her. ' hot or cold? sexy story but needed some greater care.

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