by Mina24
Mina,
I haven't read your BDSM stuff yet, because that's usually not my thing, but after reading how SMOKING HOT this submission was, I might have to submit to reading about submission. There's a kinetic energy to this one that really fires things up. Great photo on your bio, too. Hope they post that audio soon!! Can't wait!!
Much peace,
Soulchump
Between the photo of that awesome ass in your profile, the story, and your sexy voice, before I finished with your submission, there were jizz skyrockets in flight here!
Well done. I'm very jealous of the other end of "attached."
Simply Awesome!!!! Your voice is so sexy! Loved your dirty talk! Please make more!!
This is EXACTLY what I wanted in an audio story. Do some stuff just like this and you'll have a growing fanbase in no time (it helps that I'm just like the guy in this story).
God that was sooooo horny!! You have such a sexy voice and a breathy, dirty way of telling the story. Cant't wait for the next one!!
THTA WAS AWESOME YOU HAVE SUCH A SEXY HOT VOICE AND THE PIC ON YOUR PROFILE WAS AMAZING WOULD LOVE TO HEAR MORE STORIES AND SEE SEXY PIC OF YOU IN SOME NAUGHTY LIKGERIE.
That was absolutely fantastic! You have perfectly captured the fantasy of every guy who ever went to see a stripper! I would come to see you dance anywhere!
WHAT A SEXY VOICE!!!!! I WOULD BEG FOR YOU BABY......MADE ME CUM A TON!!!!!!....
So many things to like about this, Mina. I think what makes it work so well is the way you enunciate each syllable like you're savoring it (there's nothing less sexy than sloppy diction). Keep up the great work!
This is very well read, and your voice is perfect for audio stories. Keep practicing and you'll become a star of the Audio Stories section in no time!
Disturbingly similar to my own story, Get on your knees, which I wrote before you.
i enjoied the narroration but at few points it seem as if you lost your place, Although i cant blame you it is a very long story. well written and quite enticing. good job!
good story, Even better narration, being more of a submissive guy, it hit perfectly close to home.. please do more if you have time, thanks, it was just what I needed
great story very sexy voice. You captured every mans fantasy while sitting in a club. Please share more.
damn that was fucking hot!!!! i love to be teased and you really know how to tease!!!! very sexy...ending with me using you hard and deep!!! damn....awesome....
Hi,
This story turned me on- and I'm a woman
Your story really allowed me to visualize what was going on. Awesome work!
Not only is the piece very erotic, it's delivered perfectly. Even the sound quality is good.
Fantastic reading - You put the porn stars to shame by actually delivering your lines with the proper feeling. A fantastic tease, probably every guys strip club fantasy.
It's like you knew exactly what I want! I would beg for you and please you anytime and anywhere you wanted. Please ...
I must say Mina24, u hit the nail rite on the head w/ this one, just listening to that sweet sexy voice of yours telling the story,I don't think anyone will be able to resist, I know I won't be able to walk into another boobie bar without thinking of this great story!
Wow Mina that was the best story I've heard in a long time. totally got me hot, made me realize how much I miss the taste of a hot pussy!
mmm lick you teasingly tasting you inhaling you baby let me lick that clit please fingers shoving the hood up letting your clit pop out so I can suck it, lick it until you scream release
God, Mina, wow! That was something!
I loved your sort of cheeky style and super-lovely story! Thanks.
For someone who is overly obsessed with thoughts of cunnilingus.... THIS IS HEAVEN.