All Comments on 'Can I Get A Ride? Ch. 02'
by fukensploogin
- 10 Comments
Anonymousalmost 18 years agofuken,
Your story was a difficult read because of your super long paragraphs. In future stories you need to do something about that. Also, your story rambles around all over the place.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agolong/schlong.... it was a great read. Loved the music references!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI don't agree with the previous reviewer. I liked the longer detailed paragraphs. I would like to read more like this from you!
almost_an_angelalmost 18 years agoThis was a great story, I've read alot of yours and they are all really, really good. Keep them and me coming! ;)
J-Nitealmost 18 years agoI was all wet from the descriptions, and was wondering if there were going to be more. There should be. The sensations, the situations, the sex! Keep it coming!
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoPrincess Bride FTW!!!! You fucking rule!!!! I love you, lol.
~A Fan
Anonymousabout 5 years agoA bit of a rambling mess, with walls of text, the first chapter was better. The orgy was narratively superficial with little description.
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