All Comments on 'Vaseline Ch. 02'

surely you can read. Proofreading is nothing more than CAREFULLY reading your own story over and over again to find errors and correct them. Well, Duuuuhhhhh! Don't be in such a hurry to be a famous Literotica writer that you send it before you've proofread it several times. And, do you have spell check? That will take care of some things which need correcting.

Her "fertile" pussy and his "man juice"? Maybe they are making a baby and don't know it? Let's have more of this one with them starting their own family...

don't stop with the aunt ,there is stepmom.

You're wierd, that's the most disgusting story I have ever

read, and if you are really into that type of filth, you

must be out of the backwoods.....

Your stories may be called weird but they sure are hot so don't be discouraged. Lots of us love them

More...Jennifer is a pure delight....

I love smelly stinky cum dripping pussy!! Oh yea, has't been washed for 3 days you know her asshole is ripe also. I'm jacking off thinking about sticking my face in there and LICKING!!!!

and your story got me so turned on!! My panties are just soaked. This so embarrassing because now there's still over an hour left to go before I can attend to my problem and I won't be paying any sort of attention at all. This is why laptops are bad! This class can't end soon enough!! Even your user name doesn't help! :S

Take a bath for fuck sakes.

Please stop describing her vagina as fertile and her arousal as fishy... it.. just... oof. Also, please just cool it on the smell descriptions all together because they are a little over the top. Keep trying though, this is better than the first chapter. Thanks for reading my comment! Stay sexy bitches, peace out! ;)