All Comments on 'Lingerie Shop Fun Ch. 01'

As far as I can tell, this is not an Incest/Taboo Story. Was there a mix up with the category for the story?

I loved the story! Like the other person who commented on the story, it didn't explain how incest was involved (I kept waiting for the token cousin/brother-in-law reference, but it never came), so I can only assume that it was a "taboo" story based on the "sex-in-public" aspect. Ok, I can understand that and accept it. The story was great and I hope that you will continue the story later.

A very stilted style of writing containing some very odd prose. "....smiled...as he realised that this was the first time he had helped her out of a car" ?????

I don't want or intend to be patronising but I feel you were trying to bulk out the story with supposed flowery passages. It didn't work for me. Sorry.

There was a mix-up somewhere in the category. This story should have been in the erotic couplings category. I apologize for the mix-up and thank you for the positive feedback and for the one who didn't like it...sorry it's not your style but I'm sure there are many more stories on this site that meet your reading needs.