All Comments on 'Cabo Fun Ch. 01'

by cleenwheels

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Wilson SpaldingWilson Spaldingalmost 18 years ago
Good build up...

Real characters – likable, too! Real feel to the story and a good build up. I'm interested to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
So wheres the story

I read and suddenly it ended. Oh well. children have to play I guess

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
too short

why spoon feed us the chapters?

let us know if he cheated, or comes home feeling righteous and finds she cheated while he was gone.

peggytwittypeggytwittyalmost 18 years ago
Way to short for first chapter, no buildup

Don't know if I am Looking forward to chapter 2 as there is not enough here to get any idea what if anything is happening.

Will have to wait and see if there is a story here.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Taught?

A fitness instructor with a "taught" body. I wonder what she has been taught and who taught it to her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
idiot

what is your wife's name?

26thNC26thNCover 1 year ago

Aren’t there enough whores in Mexico already?

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