by Catalingus2005
You've been mentioned in the New Story Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.
Wonderful writing. A pleasure to read, and hope your main character finds happiness.
Simply Brilliant. A beautiful story that lets the reader visualise the events as they occur. And simply one of the best character developments I've ever read. Keep it up please. Looking forward to more stories from you.....
A very well written piece. You let the disjointed observations of your character give the work just the right "feel". even though the omittance of names and the "plate against the fence" were rather deliberate touches, you pulled them off beautifully and stressed them just enough so as to avoid cliche. all in all, a thouroughly enjoyable read.
Thank you.
You portrayed very well the isolation, secrecy and shame experienced by someone in an emotionally and physically abusive relationship. Sad in this case, made all the more isolating because the victim is a closeted lesbian.