All Comments on 'Lust on the Beach'

I liked the beginning of this story it was very descriptive and sensual. However the ending felt rushed. Maybe you could slow down and expand the ending with more descriptions. Other than that good story keep writing.

Too many mistakes for this story to work. You reached for her g-spot with your tongue? Do you also have a really long cock? At the end you said you had found the woman of your dreams... Go back to sleep.

Loved it up until the ending. Agreed - it sounds too rushed. 10 minutes passes in one sentence, not a great tun on. But the rest was amazing well done!

This is an example of why these wannabe authors need proofreaders. I stopped reading after the fourth line

Here's why: The author writes that the guy is walking on the beach on a hot steamy night when he sees the naked woman . THEN, he sees.her skin glistening in the sunlight. That killed it for me right there........