All Comments on 'My New Girl'

by Gizzmotick

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Wonderful

Wonderful story, I loved the passion between the two characters. It was clear that she wasn't getting what she needed from her boyfriend, and was able to get it and then some from his best friend instead.

don87654don87654almost 18 years ago
Good, but could be better

You ruined an otherwise very erotic story when you asked her if she wanted you to cum in her. All previous advances had been accepted by her and it was obvious that her boyfriend and your best friend had not satisfied her. She was probably ripe to be bred, regardless of what she stated in her sexual throes of enjoyment, and if you had cum in her, giving her your seeds, she probably would have wanted to continue with you, instead of her boyfriend and your best friend. The Hell with him, he was obviously not satisfying her.

Wolv_ProjectWolv_Projectover 16 years ago
Beautiful

Love this, you really expressed such emotion and gentleness. Jeez wish there were more men like you ;)

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