by lofwyrkp
interesting story and concept. Just a little difficult to visualize. Wish there were pictures.
No feelings, no partners, no Domme-Sub just pain.
one very minor spelling note.
First, this is NOT a criticism of the story or author. Of course, one eensy spelling error did not significantly detract from my, um, literary experience. But this particular oopsey shows up all the time on Lit. So, for the occasional readers or authors who prefer to see/use correct spellings, here's a tip: when the author uses "taught" here, the word that is meant is "taut." No "gh."
Taught is the past tense of the verb "to teach." Taut is related instead to "tight," as in "the rope was pulled taut between the tent and the tree to which it was tied."
So when you're trying to describe a tight, well-toned ass, or tight erect nipples, or whatever, that word you want--that SOUNDS like "taught"--is actually spelled "taut." Just drop the G and H, eh?
Took me a while to figure out exactly how the set up worked out. was certainly interesting, loved how it all worked out.
Is there going to be a sequel carrying the story on?
Fantastic - I am now going to read others you wrote. Please keep on writing. Your fantastic
Loved it, it's the first story of yours I read, will have to read some more!
Intense she can get them cut off I hope lol. great start pls keep writing we will be here reading ;)
Oh wow, this is probably one of the best stories on here I've read in a while
A fantastic read! This is one of the best stories I read in a long time. Really liked the 'breast bondage device'.
I read this a year ago, and came back to it today. It is well done, and I enjoyed it very much. Very erotic. Well done.
Awesome! I would love to experience this! I l would love to have rings and clamps attached to my chest and nsanely sensitive man-nipples! I would enjoy being reduced to tears from the severe strain and torture on my delicate nipples!
It would be even more awesome to have a woman walk in on me like this, openly mock me, and then caress and squeeze my nipples with oil, as if milking me, until I have an explosive orgasm!