All Comments on 'No longer the flower girl…'

by Man Ray

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Maria2394Maria2394almost 18 years ago
ooohhhhh

Man ray somehow this is deeply erotic and sort of scary at the same time. The ring seems so innocent but when paired with the words, well, its so alluring, the idea of being tied, hot

loved it!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
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Nice play on words!

wso

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Mind twisting

I loved the illustration and the poem was simply brilliant; the play of words twisted inside my head.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
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I do not see how the image and the words go together here-- is this talking about forced marriage?

Man RayMan Rayover 17 years agoAuthor
Maria2394, wso and vampiredust…

more belated thank yous. I lost touch with the concept of simple thank-you notes. My apologies for poor form!

duddle146duddle146over 17 years ago
innocence.

Everything is new ~ wide-eyed she approaches the marriage bed enthralled ~ as she awaits this magical moment.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Interesting senryu here.

LeBrozLeBrozabout 17 years ago
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Interesting senryu here.

tazz317tazz317over 12 years ago
A LONG TIME BLOOMING

plucked from his side. TK U MLJ LV NV

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