All Comments on 'Becoming A Slut Wife: Alma'

What happened to the usual run of the mill creampie-eating husband stories ?

Normally I just skip any story written by you as I am not into the slut wife accepting husband type of stories but this story was actually very good. I'm not sorry I clicked on it by mistake and will keep a eye out for more

I loved the way the story turned out .I thought it was going to be a story about you watching as your wife fucked other guys and get turned on.I like the way the story went. Surprise at the end whic was good.

It doesn't make much dirrerence what kind of stories you write. You write them well and that's what counts.

I enjoyed reading this, it was very well done. Thanks for a good read.

This story was a very nice surprise. I enjoyed it a great deal. I love when the husband man's up and doesn't take his wife's shit. Good job.

Considering there was in essence no sexual description. Possibly the only story on this site that I have enjoyed for something other than arousal. Good work.

a very nice story this one supprised me on the ending liked it

Unlike some of the other readers I wasn't surprised. All of your stories are well written. I don't always like your story line but that doesn't mean the writing isn't great.

Just Plain Be what you want and keep writing!

Regards, DJ

Two decent stories in a row?

My God that's one of the signs of the "apocalypse". I mean there are others, but JPB writing two stories without Creampie husbands and giving them some backbones? Yep one of the signs.

Good storie JPB. Most of the time I give up on you, but every once in awhile I take a chance and don't feel bad I did.

>=)

-Risq

You need to write more stories like this. LOVED IT!!

A very good story indeed. Don't always like your stories but I do always read them. Nicely done.

Loved how his foul little mind work! A bit dark and warm at the same time.

Neat job JPB!

The writing is consistently good, and the content is normally palatable to the open-minded.

Your stories are a daily pick-me-up, well almost daily.

My best regards

Helluva story Bob. Great story line.

Nice twist with just a bit of humor.

Keep Writing

Bob

As you wrote in your open letter (see http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?t=431176) we can expect a variety of different stories. This story is one I enjoyed although Alma's behavior was extreme.

Thanks for writing!

SleeplessinMD

So, a story from you that is a little romantic and a little sweet. You're not getting soft in your old age are you Bob?

I enjoyed it. Thank you.

Really enjoyed the story even though there wasn't a ton of sex. Would love to see a part 2 where we learn more details about how she got him back, and then how they started into swinging afterwards.

Thank you for paying more attention to us - simple, boring normal readers. It was hilarious!

An original story. That's worth 100 right there. And well-written to boot!

Did anything like this ever happen to one of the real life Swans or Extreme Make over people?

About your strongest of the "slut wife" stories - well done - great fantasy. I liked the ending. Could almost use an epilogue - I could see him knocking her up about 4 or 5 times - a brood of young'uns to take care of would be good for her!

Some of your stuff I like, and some I don't. This is one of your better stories. The characters are believeable, likeable, and consistent. The plot isn't TOO outlandish and the ending ties up all the loose ends. Thanks for sharing your talent with us. When I read a JustPlainBob story, whether I end up liking the story or not, I know it's going to be something original, not the same old, same old.

Goodness, a JPB story without humongous big black cocks, serial gangbangs, wimps whacking off in the closet, and daily creampies. What is the world coming to? :)

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Enjoyed the story, liked the characters.

of all JPB's work. I enjoy it each time I read it.

ohio

there was the slutish behavior on her part, and it was prompted by her belief of the pecuniary motivation for the marriage? swan or swine, the feelings were more than skin deep, apparently, for him, in the end.

for her, too?

I really enjoyed it. I hope you had as much fun writing it as I did reading it. Thank you

The reconciliation vultures must be wondering: what the hell? I am laughing at what should be a "burn and beat" her story and nodding at the reconcilliation. In a way, nobody is likable in this story. But boy has the husband got hutspah! He is a likable rogue and she is a ditz and her father is cagey and dangerous. This IS one of JPB very best stories with all that he can do when he writes well.

Of all JPB's stories this is one of my very favorites. Imagine that, a happy ending! An actual romance! Along with a wild slut, of course...

Thanks, ohio

Fun story thanks.

This is a good story. I liked the moral murkiness. The man wasn't a saint. He liked free and enthusiastic ass and getting a free education wasn't bad either.

But by the same token, love also happens. And I can see the psychology of the girl as well.

I do have a hard time buying that Alma never detected the detectives or that dad could afford that full time. But every story gets a SOD card in my book, so...

Nicely done Bob

turns into the swan song.

I like this one a lot. It's a bit of a giggle and as another reviewer put it, I like the "moral murkiness"

I don't like the title. It dissuaded (is that a word?) from reading the story, but finally, when there were no worthy new stories out I decided to give it a try. The high rating of the story certainly influenced my decision. I am glad I read the story. Maybe I will have to read the rest of the series now.

Loved it.

I think this is the third or fourth reading of this classic tale.

The one thing that came out this time is how her dad essentially threw her under the bus.

Why did he pick sides against his little girl and how could he call her 'a cock crazy slut'. This suspends disbelief. Now, I would probably say it to my daughter's face as a recrimination if I were angry. To a third party? Noooo.

Dad isn't that into his Daughter for some reason. Buying her a husband, spying on her, telling her secrets out of turn.

Hell of a guy... Maybe he'll die of an aneurysm soon.

There is not one decent character in this whole story. That is why there was absolutely no sense of loss at her cheating. The dramatic potential of the plot was there, but the selfish vacant characters completely sapped the tension from the story.

as for as jpb goes this Is typical, either something decent or something that's complete and utter donkey spunk mixed with cow shit

1/5 and that's being INCREDIBLY FUCKING GENEROUS.

but I didn't like the ending. How could anyone still love this kind of cheater enough to remarry him/her?

the shit had already hit the fan. TK U MLJ LV NV

Not a decent character here. But damn this was funnier than hell. I don't know who was worse? Her for becoming a slut when she got pretty or him for marrying her for the money, but I laughed hardest at the her Dad! What a schemer. Good one Bob!

Yes - they're all bad people. But they're funnier than hell with all their plotting and scheming! I absolutely loved this story. And the Pre-nup at the end? Perfect!

So what if none of these people are candidates for sainthood, this is one funny story.

Great story. Seems that what goes around does in fact come around. I gave it 5 stars

and a solid 4 on the Budweiser Scale !!!

Sorry, Dad. Unless you can have all nine of her lovers sent out of country, there is not a woman on this planet that I would take back until I could be assured I would never come face-to-face with them again.

This sort of tongue in cheek story was a fun read.

I am certain the sex with the guy in the house with him there would be it.

That's what would prevent a guy forgiving the cheating.

He divorced her for a reason, big time cheating... "Once a chearer, always a cheater." She'll cheat again once he lets his guard down. He'd be better off finding a better woman, one that is divorced from a cheater...might just do it.

That was a lot of fun !!

Fun story. Enjoyable read. You just have to read it in the spirit it was written

Another interesting, unpredictable, sometimes humorous, amazing 5 stars JPB winner.

Reading Open Letter From Just Plain Bob in Literotica Discussion Board may help you understand how he comes up with these crazy, treacherous, wonderful trips.

Paul in Oklahoma

I especially enjoyed the dialogue between the husband and his father-in-law.

job on originality.

When you were trending towards RAAC. He has everything he wanted. Money, a great job and now he has his freedom to find a good woman to love that he can settle down with and have a family with. Not some spoiled princess that will NEVER put him or her family in front of her own self centered desires. Entertaining to start. Ugly at the end.

RAAC has its limits. Nobody, and I mean NOBODY in their right mind would reconcile after all the utter fucking shit that's happened here. You hit rock bottom and just kept digging

if only the story didnt have her actually cheating.

But she did, a lot.

Could she really love him and have had 9 uys?

Dont see it.

Also dont see a guy getting over that amount of cheating particularly in front of him.

Another pretty good one from JPB. I guess it's best to leave your wife ugly for a long happy marriage.

If you don’t like a story that ends up with a willing cuck, don’t read it.

Wasted my time.

4/5 for writing though, good job!

What more can a guy here do...he served her the divorce papers and went all the way through to the divorce...you got to love this guy...he made her crawl back to hime... I love it.........

What was that golden oldie? Never make a pretty woman your wife? Man, she was uggggglllllyyyy!!

Come on? A cheating whore like that and he gets back with her? Stupid!

I smiled all of the way through it.

Not cute, but it was a pretty good story.

One of your better stories

Cute story but he was too much of a cuck for my taste.

What a lovely story.

Just proves you do not miss a slice out of a cut loaf

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. 5*

Enjoyed the story Thanks for your writing.

Thanks.

Yet another story wholly dependent upon a 180* switch in a character's character. Without it, there is no story. At least this one has an excuse.

Good story til the end. But the ending was meant to be ironic. Ignoring banging 9 guys in 8 months, which is already a death knell of a marriage, the malicious stunt where she banged the guy in the house while he was there was insane. Why would he even stay that night? Anyways that act alone makes trying agin impossible. But the ending was already preset in order to be a wicked irony. I dud like the FIL. MC degenerated with time. Alma's reversal seems odd. Just because he got nothing in the settlement? Better get a vasectomy. Still a fun read.

If the first thought upon learning your wife is the town bike, is to "work it out", you deserve sucking cum of her used cunt. A bona fide cuck this MC and it's amusing that story has him pretending he is not one. And posturing in the end like he can enforce any prenup. He is too well trained for that

That is one asshole that I can support! I don't think I could marry her again, but a man in love is a fool. Good story!