All Comments on 'A Bus ride'

Fine Story, good editing, too!

For a first story this was Ok. You write well but a little too clinically at the moment. With experience, I'm sure there will be more erotic content in future submissions. Keep going!

I can't wait for your next story

Loved the suddeness of the sex between mum and son. I do hope there will be another chapter.

veronica x

rgmprojects@myway.com

thanks for the short ride!

Great story to jack off to. Thanks.

thank you for it

wish i had a mom like u.... who love every inch of me inside her...... i wish i was ya son..... let me cum inside u mom...........

love u........

Just the right thing to get me off after a couple of longer stories. Thanks so much! I love the idea of them getting to it next to a sleeping guy on the bus, ingenious!

that was a very good story...i'd probably get it on again...before his dad came home

Loved the urgency of your story. I prefer short energetic stories to ones that drag out too much. Great work and looking forward to reading more from you.

It could have been a little longer and a little more deatil of the prelude, having said that it was good and different, good idea the bus, well done.

This is a way to create heat in the mind of the readers. The urgency of the situation and the feeling of being masturbated upon is what turns on. You should try writing it further but keep the urgency going by putting the father's returning back home in the picture

Yummy I would like to read how he tounged her

Superb buddy, give me more bus rides to read about. Amazing work!!!

Good story, great details. A little too short, though. What happens next? More, please.

good job

This excellent story (why don't we have more from this fine writer?) shows that motherfucking can happen almost anywhere! Here in a crowded bus a mother takes her seat on her son's lap. Of course, the boy's big dick gets hard and Mom sure feels it under her ass! Like any normal young son, he starts exploring inside his mother's panties, and finds that Mom's cunt is drenched! Naturally he finger fucks his mother, which excites her even more! Mom does what most mothers would like to do but are too inhibited--she zips down her boy's fly and hauls out his stiff dick, meanwhile losing her panties! People nearby start to notice but mother and son are too far gone to care! The boy eases his hard prick up inside his Mom's welcoming twat and achieves every son's deepest goal--he fucks his mother's dripping cunt till he blows his young balls up Mom's Holy of Holies! As they leave the bus he sees one of the best things a son can--his thick teenage ball cream streaming down his mother's legs!

great idea and wonderful build.... to climax!

PLEASE I LOVED THIS STORY! WHAT HAPPEN NEXT?

great story just wish it was longer or a series

quite a sexy story but like the other guy said it should of been in a series

i like given the panties to the old guy that was funny :P

Very well discribed, felt as if we were there. I would love to hear more, perhaps discribing an earlier experience.

Thanks

I loved when she handed her panties to the guy next to them, and then when cum ran down her leg when she stood up...holy damn that is so fucking hot.

Ive read a few storie and this one was the best i could write a whole review on it but ill just keep it short and say i was very pleased you are a very talented writer :)

Better if it was at night and they hadn't have woke old man

continue this story

I think the story should continue, its really good so far

nice one. a liplock would have added more spice but this should continue in home more romantically and erotically.

that the gifted author of this excellent story seems to have deserted us. The story shows that a boy's lust for his mother's mommy-hole and a mother's equal lust for her boy's big stiff prick can overcome the silly conventional strictures that cripple the closed-minded. A boy should be able to stick his fine fat prick up his mother's cunt whenever and wherever he feels the urge, and a mother should be able to feel her darling baby boy unload his young balls up her twat whenever and wherever they want to do it. Up his mother's twat is where a boy's rich young sperm belongs.

I wanna read more of this story! you should continue! please! continue!

I would love to fuck my mum in public

I've done this before, BEST SEX EVER

Oh I enjoyed this story a lot. That would be fun, but on the city busses here there would be no chances. I did get fucked by my son on a Greyhound bus going across Nebraska during the night a few years ago. It was wonderful.

Mary

Sadistic, that's what you are, just at the most important part of the story you had to somehow wake the old man(creepy, perv), removing the intimate, private aspect of it, removing the thrill of successfully breaking the rules without discovery. Essentially boner-killing. Sadistic indeed. That was your intention I see.

Well Played.

When the heck did the old man wake up seriously he was rubbing his cock in his sleep I guess

wow what a great bus ride, you not only took a bus ride but your mum let your prick RIDE up her puss what a great rush of both juicy puss juices mingled with cum I would have lived to drink that mix of cum and girl juice. Better yet would have luv to feel my c-ck up a lady pus.

I am stroking hard as I read your story

This type of "sitting on son's lap" story usually gets me wetter than October, but this one didn't, sadly. It was just a list of "I did this" and "she did that." No emotions, no shock, disbelief, hesitation, heat, excitement or anything else.

Some mothers are honest