All Comments on 'The Walking Orgasm Ch. 03'

Keeps getting better and better.

Good story. I like how you are adding realistic parts to the story (her past boyfriends). Chapter way to short.

I would've fancied a longer chapter, but there's always Chapter 4. You have great erotic-narrative chops. The "Oooohhhs" are so authentic! Then again, I'm vocal, so I'm all for verisimilitude in dialogue.

From one girl-next-door to another, thanks for gracing Lit with stories that have a laid-back erotic approach -- and drenched, sticky clliffhangers.