All Comments on 'The Gambler Ch. 03'

Well written and fairly descriptive. I would have liked to see more of the emotional processes involved in it, though. What was he thinking? You'd stated (I believe) twice that he was afraid, even terrified of the mere prospect, but that was before it had even started. After that, there's no mention of his state of mind at all. I don't know about the general readership, but I read this specific catagory because I LOVE the fear/sex combination. It's a heady mix. With the skill you exhibited in writing the rest of this story, your work would be nothing short of phenomenal.

I hope not. Such exquisite humiliation, but both Ryan and Melissa loved it. Are they going to go further to indulge their new found desires?

--smoothboi