All Comments on 'Roadtrip'

I find this a fairly fresh use of the road/journey/life metaphor.

I like the first stanza strong, but would like to see "unanswered doors, lowered blinds" rethought perhaps.

And I am rubbed wrongly by "gas" in the middle stanza.

The third is the strongest.

Thanks for the read.

even the danger signs are intriguing.

good write, tt2u

good to see you back

xox

maria

the journey quite nicely.

Thank you

I love this. Especially the first two lines. I may just have to print those out.