by acaciatree
.......... at an old theme, and chock full of good writing. thanks, satyricon
Absolutely loved the story.. the writing was wonderful, the visuals were so realistic, and the story itself I hope might continue. Fantastic job.
Very erotic and hot story playing on one of my favorite fantasies but you made it seem plausible and natural. When I saw the overused standard "huge cock" in there I thought it would go downhill but was happy it didn't. Can't wait to see where you take them next.
That was very hot... looking forward to reading more of your stories! Well done!
Nicely done. Thought it would be the usual prof/student story. Not. Excellent description & development. Would like to see the story develop more and unfold. One avenue would be to focus on the discomfort of each with the age difference, another perhaps with her dilemma of being in a serious relationship with someone her own age yet wanting more with the professor, perhaps the prof and his wife eventually seduce Katherine and her boyfriend ,both of whom are very reluctant at first, neither being honest with each other about the depths of their sexuality, which the prof & wife bring out.
<br>There is a powerful sexuality here that transcends the youthful longing to be taken by an experienced older lover. Where have you gone after such a brilliant start. Other stories I've read in this genre seem so lightweight compared to this. I loved the line:<br><br>
"Please," I moaned as the yawning emptiness in my cunt became unbearable. "Please. I need you..."