by Christina Samuels
I gave it a 5, because I enjoyed it. But I think you skipped a few lines. I thought she was going to give him a tongue bath, but instead she spread her legs. That was a bit confusing.
Nevertheless, a hot story.
I found the story very hot and interesting. Made me get very horny and wanton of the same thing.
Id love to hear more about how you and your girlfriend came up with this! Please...let me join in the next brainstorming session!
Very well done. The story flowed and you could feel the tension in the air and almost smell the sex in the air.