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pantys in the garden

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by Anonymous

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by vampiredust06/22/06

This made me laugh

A funny little write. Thanks for the read.

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by wildsweetone06/22/06

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Well done Art! Image rich works. (check the use of the apostrophe.)
wso

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by WickedEve06/26/06

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Most of the poem has good lines. A few not as good. It should be panties in the title.

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by thedogman7700406/27/06

I'm gardening with you.

I liked it the way that you put it as to gardening.
I see a few little changes but I truely understood and felt it.
I put the loving of last to the words.
keep going.

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by swingchick69r05/26/07

great poem!

loved it!

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