All Comments on 'pantys in the garden'

A funny little write. Thanks for the read.

Well done Art! Image rich works. (check the use of the apostrophe.)

wso

Most of the poem has good lines. A few not as good. It should be panties in the title.

I liked it the way that you put it as to gardening.

I see a few little changes but I truely understood and felt it.

I put the loving of last to the words.

keep going.

loved it!