All Comments on 'Teaching Sis'

quite well written and to the point - gave me a hard on!

Just wish there had been more.

Not bad I suppose. Could use a bit of work. It was just bluntly thrown out there. The back story was too flimsy and the fact she accepted him that quickly is a bit much. It needs some finer tunings. But overall not bad.

Mateo, should continue the lessons with his sister. You should continue the storym this leaves us hanging,