All Comments on 'The Determined Seductress'

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Deep SoakerDeep Soakeralmost 18 years ago
Overcoming relectance

This is an interesting story of seduction in which the man was partially seduced even before the woman started to exert her charms.

The story is primarily action driven with little character development. Perhaps you could develop the characters more in a continuation. This story begs for an encore.

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