All Comments on 'Mother Fucking in Florida'

do more stories

Your language makes you a total creap

wonderful story--short and sweet--I just couldn't resist masturbating as I read it--wish I had a mom like that--keep it up--give us more stories

every brit i read wanted to share his wife and be cockold.

hell....This story sucked. Not arousing at all

My buddies mom had a penchant for revenge. His dad flirted with my buds girlfriend at a party I had and she flipped out. We went to her house to apologize for breaking some stuff, and she was drinking. My brother (18yrs old), told her to relax and we told her about Patrick (husband) and Tanya touching/flirting. She was so hot, with nipples sticking out and obvious attracttion... I can tell what happened later

fake fake faaaaake

Truly terrible. I would give up now if I was you.

This was pretty good for the beginning of a story. But you wasted the build up to the sex scene by reducing it to a couple of sentences. You seem like a pretty good writer, expand on that scene some more.

who was in his early 20s when he wrote it. It's his only contribution, so I suppose the negative assholes got to him. Too bad. Why don't creeps who are down on a story just go away? Why do they have to crush the aspirations of a young writer exploring his feelings about the fascinating topic of motherfucking--of a boy sticking his young prick up between his mother's legs, mom cumming like crazy as her darling baby boy fucks the shit out of her, and the boy finally blowing his young balls up the same cunt he came out of and filling it with his creamy sperm? Well, MILFF is gone, and I for one am saddened.

That was some of the worst writing I have ever seen. Congratulations.

From his language and word use, he's Indian trying to masquerade as English; big fail

This guy's an Indian writer (and I use the term guardedly) not English at all; his language and idiom is bizarre, definitely what an Indian would use, not an English native-speaker, and his way of expressing himself is just dull and uninteresting. This reads like a tick-list of by-the-numbers sexual fantasies he's written in the order they occurred to him, it's not hot, not arousing, not interesting, and as a sidebar, would the guy who's raving about this crap and always writes the same shit about every mother/son story published here, with all that gay shit about big balls and creamy spunk, why don't you go find a gloryhole somewhere and suck some cock if it's so delightful to you? Fucking crap, no stars, this sucks ass.

I left my account open, and my friend thought it would be funny to write the last comment, I apologise for his childishness, this was uncalled for. I would never have been so rude or harsh, his comments are unforgiveable, and totally out of line, please accept my humblest apologies for his rudeness, and my assurance this will never happen again.

Hope you knocked her up too