by magmaman
I'm just the same with flat pack furniture, read the instructions last...my first thoughts on glancing at the story were "what the heck is this doing in non erotic?"
Then I read the whole story through...then I read the italicised comment at the beginning :)
Eventually I had to agree that the sex is about as unerotic as it is possible for sex to be. So that just left the story. I would have loved to have seen much more about the feelings of all three people, but otherwise a good tale.
Not unique in concept but an interesting take -
Only thing I had real confusion about was at the end - meet his Mother-in-law?? or Step-mother maybe?? Assuming sisters were half sisters but that was fine and fairly obvious -
Bar owner says the band should nice to the customers, so, it doesn't mean he has to make a baby with them. He doesn't have to even walk by them or talk to them, just be polite and say, "hi" and let it go at that.
life in the future holds mystery. TK U MLJ LV NV
The father's wife is the son's step-mother, not his mother-in-law. Small thing, obviously, but it threw me out of the story.
A good little story. The mother in law /stepmother mistake was a shame but still gave you 5* for this story. Thank you. Mel B known as Hornydevil47