All Comments on 'Whispers'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
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I'm just the same with flat pack furniture, read the instructions last...my first thoughts on glancing at the story were "what the heck is this doing in non erotic?"

Then I read the whole story through...then I read the italicised comment at the beginning :)

Eventually I had to agree that the sex is about as unerotic as it is possible for sex to be. So that just left the story. I would have loved to have seen much more about the feelings of all three people, but otherwise a good tale.

TavadelphinTavadelphinover 11 years ago
Very different - and good

Not unique in concept but an interesting take -

Only thing I had real confusion about was at the end - meet his Mother-in-law?? or Step-mother maybe?? Assuming sisters were half sisters but that was fine and fairly obvious -

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
VERY CONFUSING

WHO WAS WHO AND RELATED IN WHAT WAY....VERY BORING

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
The Guy's a Friggin Idiot

Bar owner says the band should nice to the customers, so, it doesn't mean he has to make a baby with them. He doesn't have to even walk by them or talk to them, just be polite and say, "hi" and let it go at that.

tazz317tazz317over 7 years ago
WHEN EVERY ONE STAYS TRUE TO FORM

life in the future holds mystery. TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
His Step-Mother

Not his mother-in-law and half sisters.

ForensicFossilForensicFossilalmost 4 years ago

The father's wife is the son's step-mother, not his mother-in-law. Small thing, obviously, but it threw me out of the story.

Hornydevil47Hornydevil476 months ago

A good little story. The mother in law /stepmother mistake was a shame but still gave you 5* for this story. Thank you. Mel B known as Hornydevil47

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