All Comments on 'Gen's Longest Journey Ch. 01'

Hi, this is my first erotic story. I have ideas on where to take this, but I would like some feedback on what you think of this chapter. Anything you especially like or dislike, want to see more of / less of? Thanks for reading anyway.

I liked it. Quick read, short, hot, and to the point. Thank you L. Can't wait until the next installment.

You carry it well, WRITE MORE. Great Reading. Sending link to my gf she will love it.

A good quick story straight to the point. Fine first effort.