All Comments on 'Dry Valley Ch. 11'

Thank you for continuing but I wish it was longer. Really looking forward to getting to read what happens between Mitch and Jess.

Hey great job Jus!!! I am enjoying watching this story develop. Thanks for writing and if my memory serves me right SEVERUSMAX is next and then ME. Yipppppeeeeee.... I love this story!!!!!

jushorny:

Things were going along very well. All Mitch had to do was convince Jessica and now we have more trails to trod. Please, lets get back to the simple life. Thank You. Ronnie W.

I'm loving the pursuit of Mitch and Jessica. To me the romance is in the little things he's doing to try to convince her to stay. Nice writing, Jus....very nice.

I like the juxtaposition of romance with the darker side I introduced last...I think it gives the story some tension, and your writing goes a long way toward making this story more readable. Very nice!

nice touch jus..like the highschool yearbook.!