All Comments on 'An Online Sin'

Some people can say a lot with a few words!. You are almost there. I found your story something that could really happen so it held my attention..thanks..dan

I really enjoyed this! Great job!

I hope this will continue?

..ass turned it from great to SHIT

Well handled, well paced, perfect in fact, and ended at the right moment so as to leave the possibility of a folow-up or to stand on its own.

Will make a point of checking out your past stories.

and hot, hot, hot. Gotta git me one of those things . . . a web cam!

You have to question the rationality of the Anonymous poster who finds nothing wrong in the incest and stalking of the sister, both highly criminal acts, but is offended by the perfectly legal offer to perform some backdoor banditry by ben.

Could this be due to taking overlong at toilet training, or perchance the realisation that if a cock was filling their arse they'd no longer to be able to talk out of it?

Wondefully sexy. Multi cum worthy

Forget those other categories (unless you're working on the contest), we need more bro/sis, mom/son nastiness. Thanxxx a bunch.

I'm not usually into the incest stuff on this site but this has just enough of the forbidden fruit to get the blood racing... I think you should have described the pic on your bio page though just to give us all the idea! :-)

I love this girls writing and can't wait for more, more, more!

Peter

At the very end, after he had cum on your picture, you called him by his GIVEN name, not his screen name. If he has half a brain, he will figure it out! Or is that what you secretly wanted?

An incest story that didn't sound preposterous. You pushed a lot of buttons with this naughty story, which I hope, will be the first of many of yours I'll read. Well done.

Your story was so fucking nice. It didn't sound unrealistic and the way it as played out was so hot.

Please, I beg of you, write more. I have you favorited. <3

His sn is Ben18uk

How is it hard to guess that his name is Ben?

It's not because it's stated in his username.

So there was no mistake.

I enjoyed reading this story, I even favored it. I think it was simple, realistic, the term incest wasn't used a lot as I see in some other stories. This was fun, written well and I enjoyed it.

Very nice.

Hot!