All Comments on 'Captive Ch. 01'

It's nice to read a hot story from a submissive young slut. I hope you find the master you crave. Keep writing your perverted fantasys down. Hurry up with part two!

to keep her? heh..j/k...enjoyed it although i'd have liked to read a bit longer story, but hey thats just me *smile* keep on writing, it was cool. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

great beginning keep going!!!

keep writing girl!!! loved it!

absoutely loved it keep them coming doing a great job immensely hot!!!!

Well, at least she has a good excuse for being late now.

Take her home, yes! But I would have pleasured myself and shot a big hot load in that sweet virgin's mouth.