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A Sundowner (poetry challenge)

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/07/06

Your poem...

was mentioned in the New Poems Reviews.

This is lovely, beautiful, breathtaking.

I love the world through you.

S&D

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by My Erotic Trail07/08/06

superb

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by 07/08/06

Actually quite lovely

and told with an economy of words ... each one counts and each has its place!

Well done!

Regards, DJ

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by Anonymous07/08/06

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ahhhh dreamy.... I love the first two lines, they dont get more poetic than that!

thanks for playing along in this challenge-- always good to read your work--

~annaswirls

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So many think so much of you

But I have some problems, Lots of feeling and good poetry essence. I just don't see a solid object. I still have problems with the lack of punctuation. Rhythm is solid and nice flow, but no POV. Point of view. No question that it flies..., but it makes no rest upon the earth. Needs to be grounded. Just a bit.

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Short and sweet..

And to the point.

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by champagne198207/09/06

late evening is...

my favourite time of day too. Lovely.

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by Maria239407/10/06

wow!

the first two lines are wonderful. The rest is good too, but wow...you really started with a bang and not a whimper. Now I Have this image of the woind being born and its a soothing happy feeling. thanks!!

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by LeBroz10/28/06

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Excellent economy of words
Of the wind in the trees
Overnight nesting.

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by duddle14601/04/07

peaceful

The whisper of the wind through the trees ~ it's vibrations speak of life uninterrupted.

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by Amyfriend03/05/07

Excellent poem...

that creates wonderful images. Very nicely done.

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