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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous07/06/06

Naked Love

Warm and tender and sexy as hell!!

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by impressive07/08/06

Should be a warning label on this ...

... for its sweetness. Sexy & well-written (if a bit syrupy for my tastes). Nice job! ~Imp

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by 07/11/06

Excellent

Charming story, nice people, good ending. Good job Alex.

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by Rumple Foreskin07/11/06

Another fine de Kok production

Smooth, well-crafted writing with interesting characters and a nice little plot.

Rumple

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by Selena_Kitt07/11/06

Awwwwwwwww!

Now I'm feeling all warm and fuzzy... :) This was sweet as could be. Good luck in the contest!

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by Queen of Mars07/12/06

Lovely

Very nice, sentimental, great Nude Day story and first time between new lovers. Congratulations.

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by Anonymous07/13/06

Ah, those first time lovers...

Everyone remembers their fist time. The tale you spun was intimate ad passionate, however it was not my first time. In general, you write well, and I could visualize he beach, the pines and the sand. There is a sexiness in theimplied tension between the man and the woman, and a peacefulness in their afterglow. I sensed a long time relationship, that took an afternoon at the beach in the Nudist Colony to take that relationship past top dead center. Very nice!

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by Anonymous04/29/07

Loved it

Wonderful little story!


- Joe

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by ChucksSite02/09/12

"This moment was ours. Not mine, not hers. Ours." I think this ....

sums up the story. A very tender story. It surprised me on several accounts: one, that the parking lot was half full, but the beach was nearly deserted (must have been a small lot); I thought they were going to have a lot of interaction with others if the beach had been crowded; two, meeting Aunt Jen led me to think that there would be a different direction to the story, maybe orgy type (must have been dreaming); and three, they must have been quite shy for having been together and thinking of marriage, they had apparently limited sexual contact until the "Impulse" - the final rush of all the action at the end. Still, it was a fun story with a nice ending that could be extended into other stories, but can easily stop at it's conclusion. The question is: does she get pregnant from this coupling or was she really protected? What if she wasn't and she did and he wasn't really ready or scared or the responsibility? That would have been a completely different ending. Oh well, I like stories that end happily. Now off to bed to dream about my youth and nude adventures. Thanks, Alex.

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by Anonymous04/17/12

Better & better

A nice and gentle story. and as usual, well-told.
Thanks
HP

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by Anonymous12/10/13

Short & Sweet

A neatly-written short. A beginning, middle & end in a nutshell
Thanks
HP

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