nice write (~_~) thanks for the read
Now that I have read this, I think I understand. Wonderful Flora, wonderful.
i had written this one. very good!
Five stars, but shouldn't it be "in its golden..."? And the last line, not quite right, I think.
those 2 heathen bitches in the Poetry forum always whining about 'anonymous" but where is there judgmental attitude when "anonymous" leaves a GOOD comment? ABSENT, like their brains...and yes, I am referring to that sorry excuse for a moderator they have now.
I liked your poem, assign me annonymous, too
I enjoyed your poem. It reminded me of Carole King's "Will You Love Me Tomorrow". Intimacy on that level with another brings with it an inherent fear of abandonment. Poetry such as yours is a great medium for exploring and expressing this. I commend you and look forward to reading more.
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