All Comments on 'Sleeping Beauty'

by Sapphos Sister

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailalmost 18 years ago
sleeping beauty

nice write (~_~) thanks for the read

PatsplaythingPatsplaythingalmost 18 years ago
This is good.

Now that I have read this, I think I understand. Wonderful Flora, wonderful.

Love

David

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 18 years ago
i wish

i had written this one. very good!

~Syn

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Five stars

Very nice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Very good

Five stars, but shouldn't it be "in its golden..."? And the last line, not quite right, I think.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
and so it goes....

those 2 heathen bitches in the Poetry forum always whining about 'anonymous" but where is there judgmental attitude when "anonymous" leaves a GOOD comment? ABSENT, like their brains...and yes, I am referring to that sorry excuse for a moderator they have now.

I liked your poem, assign me annonymous, too

sylerbeansylerbeanalmost 12 years ago
Good exploration of intimacy versus abandonment

I enjoyed your poem. It reminded me of Carole King's "Will You Love Me Tomorrow". Intimacy on that level with another brings with it an inherent fear of abandonment. Poetry such as yours is a great medium for exploring and expressing this. I commend you and look forward to reading more.

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