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by Anonymous06/05/08

very good

Loved the way you brought in pilot at the end. Similar to star trek Vulcan mating urge. Look forward to reading more. Just one suggestion she should go with pilot next time. Could open up a whole series with them traveling the galaxy. Just a thought. Very good story A+.

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by Anonymous11/10/09

I rest my case,

This is far better than anything I would write, it is also, to my mind, a degree of magnitude better than the other story we discussed. The scoring system here is crude but I try to reflect my subjective enjoyment and objective judgement of a story in relative scores. On that basis this story was better written and I enjoyed it more, espc. the dry humour. -- UK CYNIC

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by Anonymous04/27/11

Fantastic story. Are you planning a sequel? Ellen being gangbanged by these aliens would be really cool.

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