by Bill Smith
Nice work. A little too much metaphores and poetic writing style for my tastes, but it was still a great story.
cute made me laugh when you called mr. happy lucifer. other than that a very good story! best answer you could have given.
Dont understand why females in most stories are tiny. They might be curvy, big butted, huge breasts, (which make them look disproportionate), etc., but usually are 5 feet, 5'-2" the most. Very seldom taller than 5-6, on straight, non fetish stories, why?
A five foot, two inches woman is very, very, small. Average american girl is 5-6".