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by Tzara

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Sensual

A short, well crafted and v hot poem. Thank you for the lesson, I am humbled.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
slow and alluring..

a good piece of erotica...blue

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
oh my!

this set my wings all a flutter!

perfect use of detail, the gentleness, terrific, Tzara!

~annaswirls

ishtatishtatover 17 years ago
?

Hard to fault.Maybe the fullstop at the end could be left out!

champagne1982champagne1982over 17 years ago
Erotic

and minimal. I always think of my butterfly as an orchid.

But now I have an image of the creature emerging

from a cocoon, pumping it's wings full

to spread and dry in the sun for flight.

fluttering bye...

l8blooml8bloomover 16 years ago
Well, that was hawt.

Excuse me, I have to go do something now.

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