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WickedEveover 17 years agoThis is good
It seems to be too wordy when I first look at it, but reading it, it's not. You don't give the reader more than he needs. There's just enough there so the reader can get a clear picture of what's going on.
My Erotic Trailover 17 years agoexcellent
I like poetic tales <grin... I really liked these lines...
Intrusion,
welcomed, but protested all the same.
Art~
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