All Comments on 'Wife's First Swallow'

Come on, this should be in the nonconsent category. Rape of teenage children by police officers, you know, that's still the most common claim in public insurance.

Anyway, IMO, you can't write. Your grammar's full of holes, your plot's as old as law enforcement, there's not a line of development about your main female child beyond that she's mixed. The only way this could have been worse is if you used 'nubonics' in the dialogue, and even there you came pretty close.

Not a bad story, I personally dont read stories on this website for a grammer lesson. Louie n' Ohio is bored because he lives in Ohio. Keep up the great stories and send me a nude pic of that hot ass wife you have.

Dude no-one can blackmail a kid for staying out late particularly not a cop! Dude how can anyone get turned on by this it's rape pure and simple. If there are more people out there like you then I wonder why there arn't more arrests of power weilding cunts who think that rape is somthing to be turned on about. Also if this story is true then can your wife please report this? I know it may not get anywhere but if it means that she can help a young girl from being forced into a situation she doesn't like then it'll be worth any effort she can give

Even a tenuous link to real life possibilities can work wonders in a story. This one stank. It's just so far out of its box, it didn't bear reading. And I didn't care for the (needless) reference to colour. WTF was THAT about ?

Lucky to have found this hot story. Real or not, it turned me on. Why else do we write and read these stories? How else do we judge them? These won't be getting Pulitzers any time soon. I could imagine myself in that position....and loving it.

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You made me cum too ! :-)

Your wife is a whore

my wife has a well paying job in adult day care for a mostly Hindu population. While the owner has a stunning Hindu wife he has been sniffing around my wife since he hired her. This past spring there were some financial problems and he asked her to help him with the books after closing. After my objections he called me and invited me out for drinks, I thought I would drink him under the table but instead I got sloshed and we agreed that my wife needed to support him totally. the next day he ordered her to stay after everyone left and brought her back to his luxoriuos private office. She had serious doubts until he played my drunken surrender on his cell phone. realizing how much her paycheck meant to us my wife obeyed his instruction and went to her knees. From his cell phone camera I later watched my old lady lick, kiss, and suck her his dark brown cock. Then with a simple command Swallow he thrust his brown cock deep into her open mouth. She gagged for just a moment then swallowed his seed down. I felt betrayed as she refuesd to swallow me.

Eventually she did swallow me but in her new better paying positon she works late every night and comes home smiling

your old lady is just fulfilling the duties of her job.and I would like to be her boss.

God sucks cock and swallows hot cum everyday of the year. And Jesus is a filthy disgusting cocksucker as well.

My wife started sucking cock in high school and swallowed every load dumped in her mouth. She became quite popular because of her cock sucking. After being married a few years to splice things up we tried a threesome and she let me know she got to suck the guy off before he could fuck her. Well that's what she did and sucked him dry and swallowed. Fucking was secondary to her cock sucking and swallowing so I got to watch and photo her doing lots of guys. Then SHE wanted to start doing more than a threesome and need I say where this led too. One night she sucked off 22 high school kids at a park in about a 2 hour period. And when she finished said she wished they were more of them.x88ty

God was sucking cock and swallowing when he punished a good man like me from having a good wife and family to share my life with, and i never did anything wrong either.

Boring

God and Jesus are both cum dumpsters.

The juice is loose.

Satan even came in God's fucking mouth after God sucked him off.