All Comments on 'Witch of the Wind'

Beautiful

Sensual

Sensuous

Intimate

Loving

Thank You...

of prose created by a charming author to snare and entwine the souls of those lucky enough to capture them for a fleeting instant in this veil of time.

In other words, sigh, beautiful.

that was beautiful. thank you

Tied......

You have true gift for imagery and dialogue. You created a great vignette to captivate us for the read and it was in a word, magical.

If you'd have left out the "realistic" parts and posted it in the poetry section I would have been really impressed.

As a (simple) story, it's unusual but not very interesting. Who are these people? Why is she so spiritual, is she new age or something?

Nice to see something different though.

Hope to see more!

The essence of the Witch, perfectly captured.

refreshing to read something different from this category. very well written.

TW:

I don't think I've ever read anything with such compelling imagery as what you've written. This was as accomplished a telling as I've read on this site. As I read your piece I kept asking myself, "How did she ever think to compose her thoughts so imaginatively and beautifully?" To be honest, I felt so inadequate in comparing any skills I may have to the artistry you've exhibited through this story. Thank you for sharing this gem.

Philip

great imagery. thank you.

Strange, but oddly satisfying.

wrong category penalty

Primal, mystical, sexy. Great effort!