All Comments on 'The Date'

by Nightbird

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Aurora BlackAurora Blackover 17 years ago
Your story

Has been mentioned in the New Story Reviews thread.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Speaks to me - very romantic

I enjoyed the simplistic recollection from the man's view. It is great to see such sweet romanticism from a man. I especially enjoyed the part where he asked her to dance. Oh hell, I liked the whole thing. I hope you will posting more soon. If you can do this with a romantic venture I can't wait to see what you do with an erotic romp. tws

BrightdawnBrightdawnover 17 years ago
Breathtaking

Loved this story the first time I read it...and still feel the same now...A simple story with so much feeling...Please don't stop Cowboy, would love to read more from you...

BabyBlackRoseBabyBlackRoseover 17 years ago
Romance at it's best

I love how you write, brings back the feelings of how romance should be .. You have a wonderful talent , Please don't ever stop writing ..

BabyBlackRose @-->-->--

SweettitsSweettitsover 17 years ago
Romance

You have such a romantic touch, I look forward to your next story.

Hugs

CathleenCathleenover 17 years ago
Very sweet

A lovely tale NB, you show the simple things can be the most sweet. Leaves me with a soft sigh.

MzLadyMzLadyover 17 years ago
Love your tenderness Nightbird...

A wonderful story of romantic innocence, woven together with such gentle tenderness that it causes a woman's heart to swoon. Don't stop now, you're just getting us all warmed up :)

SaucyminxSaucyminxover 17 years ago
Lovely

Took my breath away. Thank you. Can't wait until your next submission.

bobsgirlbobsgirlover 17 years ago
Well done!

Very romantic and sweet. We all need somebody like you to show us a little romance, NB. Nice job.

poppy1963poppy1963over 17 years ago
So nice!

I loved this story, NB! It was sheer romance and unexpected in that...it made me smile and want lasagne too. hee hee! The dancing on the sand was marvelous stuff...barefoot with only tiki lights and soft music! Melts. :)

kycuriousitykycuriousityover 17 years ago
Terrific Job!

Clearly, you are another bard, NB. Great job, sweetie!

JaenelleJaenelleover 17 years ago
Very well done!

I would like to see a chapter 2 to this. This is wonderful writing and romantic.

Jaen

fun2kissamyfun2kissamyover 16 years ago
I loved it!

I was drawn in from the beginning. I love your focus on the romance. Thank you for reminding me it is alive!

IrishSpriteIrishSpriteover 16 years ago
Very Good

Nice to see that romance still lives in the hearts of many

fire_breezefire_breezeover 16 years ago
Sweet

The story is absolutely sweet and it made my heart melt. Thank you.

PassionatePattyPassionatePattyover 16 years ago
Well done...

Looking forward to more from you!

availableslave2uavailableslave2uover 16 years ago
would you?

would you please ask me out on a date nightbird?

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Loved your Story

I loved your story NB. It made my heart melt and made me know what it feels like to be in love.

LadyGenevieveLadyGenevieveabout 13 years ago
How utterly romantic!

I love this - it brings back such memories! Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Wow

That was so beautiful. I've never been on a date like that. I am so utterly jealous right now. I dont know what to do with myself. If that is a true story man... Where can I find a guy like that?

RedHairedandFriendlyRedHairedandFriendlyover 11 years ago
Very sweet

I really enjoyed your story this morning, thanks for sharing it. I think a date like that would be more than just fun, it would be delightfully perfect. ~ Red

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
I kept waiting for the big surprize

Head scratcher, it never came. Just a nice picnic...

rjr_1954rjr_195412 months ago

Why did you not continue very touching beautiful story? It makes my heart cry for a type of love never achieved!

TarnishedPennyTarnishedPenny11 months ago

Oh, wow! Very short, but flowing well and wonderfully romantic. I look forward to seeing further works and would encourage you to consider longer ones (to make the pleasure last).

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Very beautiful story. And I love your writing style. But… more, please

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