All Comments on 'Summertime Is The Best Ch. 01'

Great plot. Would love to read more.

The way you told the bathroom scene made me believe your story as I had a similar encounter with my cousin . Nice Job .

Please don't abuse periods. ".....", that is. It's annoying.

Next time, please either improve your English or get someone to look over your book first!

Please continue--Josh needs a good fucking!

once again swami tries to change human nature with his totaslly unrealistic stories this is so far out there it belongs in the fantacy area don't get me wrong i love incest stories but only if they are good, believable, realistic,loving and consensual swami has failed every time

Please, please, please learn how to use commas. There were so many "..." That some sentences resembled morse code rather than prose.

There are plenty of people here that will edit for you, there were more grammar and spelling mistakes than I can even begin covering. "volts wagon beetle" Is that a new electric car from Volkswagen?