All Comments on 'Gina Ch. 01'

by Tommy1982

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
great start

He damm well better go after her!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Loose?

People don't loose their virginity they lose it.

Try to learn the difference between the two words.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

interesting story. it wasnt rushed . whats missing are characters the reader can identify with. characters that are real. personally im looking for that woman who isnt perfect. i prefer the flawed , imperfect person. the woman who isnt a pro at sex. i would revel in her ackwardness, as i perform in my own clumsy way

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