All Comments on 'Finish'

made me chuckle,Art. I loved your innuendo, brought a smile to my face.

your erotic escapade of the mundane! too hilarious!

your erotic escapade of the mundane! too hilarious!

your erotic escapade of the mundane! too hilarious! you are soooo clever!

was mentioned in the New Poems Reviews of 8-11-06.

Loved this, Art!

Playful and powerful, you clever devil, you!

S&D

I love the images you invoke here. The opening verse is classic. Truly erotic.

Tess

these wee satires from your wabbit bag...you have gift of metaphoric humor...blue

Dang!!

I love this image! however, ( yep, suggestion comin')

suppose you leave out "the opening" and the second "I" like this...

Satisfied with the nude cherry

I entered

over the threshold

and splattered my stain.

good work, MET. I am enjoying watching as you grow

hugs,

maria

What can I say? Brilliant as always, as if I expected anything less than the best. Thanks for a great read and the huge smile :)