All Comments on 'Nurse Mom and Me'

by Wheels25

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
I know how ya feel mate being in a chair myself!

This is the first story that I have read that actually spoke of the frustrations that prople in wheelchairs go through! My Mother was a nurse too, but I would never have thought about going that far! But I do have to say that I have had fantasies about other nurses after going in and out of hospital all my life! Well done for being brave enough to right this story as it fit me to a tee but I am not brave enough to publish the ones i have written on my pc!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
toy

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Good Story

Nice job on the storyline. It really drew me in. Could use some more details to help the pace not be so rushed and flesh out some of the more important scenes in your story.

I'd love to see you rewrite it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Way too fast

Your idea was good, but you rushed it way too fast, Try again, but next time let everyone become more comfortable with the characters first.

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Fantastic story great mother and nurse and son hopefully they'll be together forever

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