by Wheels25
This is the first story that I have read that actually spoke of the frustrations that prople in wheelchairs go through! My Mother was a nurse too, but I would never have thought about going that far! But I do have to say that I have had fantasies about other nurses after going in and out of hospital all my life! Well done for being brave enough to right this story as it fit me to a tee but I am not brave enough to publish the ones i have written on my pc!
Nice job on the storyline. It really drew me in. Could use some more details to help the pace not be so rushed and flesh out some of the more important scenes in your story.
I'd love to see you rewrite it.
Your idea was good, but you rushed it way too fast, Try again, but next time let everyone become more comfortable with the characters first.
Fantastic story great mother and nurse and son hopefully they'll be together forever