All Comments on 'Dry Valley Ch. 17'

SEVERUSMAX - - - You handled all the characters with great skill and I'm thrilled to have seen this rodeo scene in the story. For the readers. . .the darkness is coming. . .;) Another great read to a fun story that is about to get a little twisted. Thanks for writing in the Valley, where it is anything but Dry. :D ~ Red.

Thanks for another great chapter, SEVERUSMAX. The story is really rolling along, now! (I almost hate to cast a shadow over the happy proceedings, but you knew it was coming...and I'm happy to oblige!) Thank you for the character build. Your contribution has been key to this story, and always welcome.

You did a great job bringing the characters together. It would have been a very difficult chapter for me to write, but it comes across as effortless for you

Very good story. Though of course I did see a couple of writing mistakes. I liked how you told about their day at the rodeo. I admit I haven't read any of the other chapters but will have to catch up. This is a very good chain story I give it a 5.

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SEVERUSMAX:

You handled those two decisions with style. As I see it there is only one more to solve. Thank You. Ronnie W.