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Goodbye Summer 2006

bySissy Adele Howells©
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by LeBroz08/16/06

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This poem was mentioned in Wednesday's New Poems Reviews.

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by Maria239408/16/06

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I am impressed with this. You are truly growing:) Iw ould however rethink the lines,_ "summer has gone, for another year"

you really just dont need them, but the last 2 lines are great. good work

maria

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