by bbwlove_it
If you are to have a second chapter you should've made more of a buildup, but it's different to your other stories that I just read. You are good, don't stop writing.
Great descriptions, very sensual. Any dialogue, ass worshipping, or anal in the future?
This was the greatest story I've read in my life, It kept me guessing the whole time... Please continue to write, your very talented and gifted.